The Apple Tree (v2)

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Mon Aug 08, 2022 12:37 pm

JJHenderson wrote:
Mon Aug 08, 2022 12:45 am
[ I'm also tempted to suggest "tear-dropped," which of course plays on "teardrop" but also the "dropped" nature of the apples; but that's probably just my love of wordplay/puns coming through.
'Ave it!
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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