He had a babe in arms, his grand child,
- that black and white thing,
as heavy as lead you seemed to feel his bones
Metal mickey they called him.
Now the same baby, grown up into a man,
feeds his Grandparent who once held him in his arms
orange juice, tips the flask in increments of love
back towards the warmth
while we’re watching, taking snapshots
behind our eyes, no camera shot will make it true
except our own of grief,
and those who we thought we knew.
Old Photograph.
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He had a baby in his arms, proud of his grand -child,
as heavy as lead you seemed to feel his bones-
Metal mickey they called him.
Now the same baby, grown up into a man,
makes confident jokes, but sees the same thing,
feeds his Grandparent
orange juice, tips the flask in increments of love
back towards his trembling lips warmth.
Old Photograph
That feels like the poem for me.ton321 wrote: ↑Thu Dec 28, 2023 4:30 amHe had a babe in arms, his grand child,
- that black and white thing,
as heavy as lead you seemed to feel his bones
Metal mickey they called him.
Now the same baby, grown up into a man,
feeds his Grandparent who once held him in his arms
orange juice, tips the flask in increments of love
back towards the warmth.
thanks mac for the leadMacavity wrote: ↑Thu Dec 28, 2023 8:20 amThat feels like the poem for me.ton321 wrote: ↑Thu Dec 28, 2023 4:30 amHe had a babe in arms, his grand child,
- that black and white thing,
as heavy as lead you seemed to feel his bones
Metal mickey they called him.
Now the same baby, grown up into a man,
feeds his Grandparent who once held him in his arms
orange juice, tips the flask in increments of love
back towards the warmth.
Counting the beats,
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
Wakeful they lie.
Robert Graves
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
Wakeful they lie.
Robert Graves