Double-glazed.

[ton321]

Dark nights are drawing in -you say
with the voice you had last year,
same time , same place, the same old view
when you pull the curtains over;

he got new windows after she'd died
to cure the condensation.
Six months later he went too
much to Grandmas elation.

[Macavity]

Dark nights are drawing in -you say
with the voice you had last year,
same time , same place, the same old view
when you pull the curtains over;

he got new windows after she'd died
to cure the condensation.

Particularly enjoyed these lines Tony, the sameness and the progression, and that use of 'cure'.

[ton321]

Thanks Mac

[camus]

Dark nights are drawing in

"And your humour is as black as them"

I think you might just about have got away with those 'Half Rhymes' ? Maybe not.

Enjoyed though, good stuff.

Cheers
Kris

[ton321]

The shadow of "The Smiths" still lingers.

Tony