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Tue Jan 25, 2005 12:38 am

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the steady beat of your
mouth running ripples around mine
the paining seep of dust
pegs my hands down
to more pain
rooted in desire
I seek nothing more than

I am nothing less than

take with you what you will
solid is not my strong point
madness takes a firm hold but not today, today
I am surging slightly but contained
in candlelight contours
creeping softly down the sinews of your spine
where i feel at home

there is no flesh only bone
hard and uncompromising
yet peaceful in its resolve
to break only,
never bend,
but break only
in the end

I take my leave of you
my friend
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Tue Jan 25, 2005 12:46 am

Desi,

I missed you. Good to see you posting again. Look forward to seeing more soon. Ah, incidentally there is a London, CA.

--A.S.
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Tue Jan 25, 2005 1:09 am

hey, thanks. it's good to be back. couldn't face anyone for a while. am resurfacing now. like the phoenix. (i hope.) CA is that california? i wonder what london is like there. got to be less dreary than this one right now.....
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Tue Jan 25, 2005 3:15 am

Dark,

I like the use of repitition, it works well.

Good read.
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Tue Jan 25, 2005 11:37 am

thanks cam. i value your opinion.
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Tue Jan 25, 2005 3:28 pm

Desi,

London, California...hmmm, its down in the same large valley that I live in. Its a small town of perhaps a thousand people, but has managed to be the largest drug producer in five counties... As to a dreariness contest? I don't know who would win; we haven't seen the sun in three weeks (we've lots of fog in the winter). You tell me...

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Wed Jan 26, 2005 6:06 pm

dark poem,
i liked it alot i find when i try to write a dark poem,it sometimes reflects how i feel.... only a thought. tom.
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Wed Jan 26, 2005 6:39 pm

...eh?
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Wed Jan 26, 2005 6:43 pm

i just meant it was a good poem,i enjoyed it.. :) tom.
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Wed Jan 26, 2005 6:45 pm

thanks tom. x
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