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Dont look for A hiDden messAge
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 4:17 am
by azathoth
Ugly,
Writhing utter there's
encased not ensconced
inhalation absolving sanity for its detriment
but eddies
utilizing void's crafty numb feeling
a
angry corpse
does care asks what? i seep
seemly of Ockam
lust grain matte
emptiness hate this poem
Janco vortex grave spastic whether at us
negative
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 7:33 pm
by cameron
Hi Azathoth
This sounds like it was constructed by randomly selecting words and sticking them together. (or are you trying to emulate Vogon poetry?)
Cam
ps apologies for the site being unavailable today. Apparently a DoS attack on the level 3 bandwidth occurred (whatever that means)
No hidden meaning
Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 4:20 pm
by Leslie
The instruction is not to look for a hidden meaning, but the poem taken as a whole has a feeling, a mood to it - not a pleasant one I have to say. The words seem to fit together, not grammatically, but within that mood. I don't understand what's going on but I would certainly like to know.
Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:38 am
by camus
sounds like a spam poem, the kind you get on porn spam emails.
Burroughs cut'n'paste.
Why not indeed.
Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 1:06 am
by pseud
I was going to guess magnetic poetry...
Caleb
Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 3:31 pm
by azathoth
I'm sorry, but the hidden message was in the topic "Don't look for A hiDden messAge" or "DADA".
I just felt like abusing art for a little bit, it wont happen again!
Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 7:52 pm
by c90
nice one!
the words you picked do purvey an atmosphere though
c90
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http://c90.blogspot.com)
Hidden Meaning
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 3:31 pm
by Leslie
Why not happen again? Reckon that was amusing and I was slow not to realise the mixed letter case in the title was significant. Good joke, but still feeling to have meaningful undertones. Appreciated.
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 5:41 pm
by pseud
Abusing art or mocking art criticism? Either way, reminds me of the second graders lauded for their abstract artwork, and winning lots of money in art contests as they put grown men, "masters of the craft," to shame.