Ray and Phil in Flight of the Dragonfly

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Mon Apr 15, 2024 2:11 pm

Very nice! I like the coffee poured into one's ear. Congrats to both!

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Cheers John. My Shakespearian influence 8)
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Oh oh oh that Shakespeherian rag!

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Congratulations! Good poems, Phil.
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Cheers Caleb.
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Thu Apr 25, 2024 7:28 am

Thanks. Having that Facebook poem accepted made me remarkably happy, almost optimistic. It won't last, though.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Champions League next season!
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Macavity wrote:
Thu Apr 25, 2024 9:10 am
Champions League next season!
Let's not count our chickens just yet.

folktale life will boat the bookish man. - lovely line, Phil. Well done.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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