Centrifugal Eye

[Macavity]

Making an appearance

https://issuu.com/centrifugaleye/docs/t ... 4/36389661

As usual thanks for all the help

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mac

[Firebird]

Really liked it, Mac, especially the second stanza and the 'aubergine clouds' in S3.

Many congrats!

Tristan

[Macavity]

Thanks Tristan. Pleased you enjoyed...especially the aubergines

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mac

[Magpie Jane]

Congrats, Mac!

Those two are truly terrific.
I like the way you handle boathouses, and the snailed church and those priesting mussels are irresistible.

Jane

[David]

Well done, Mac! Quite interesting, those two poems riffing off each other. If you were only going to keep one - and why would you? - it would have to be Playing at Being Dylan, I think. It reads like a stream-lined version of Laugharne.

Cheers

David

[Macavity]

Congrats, Mac!

Those two are truly terrific.
I like the way you handle boathouses, and the snailed church and those priesting mussels are irresistible.

Jane

Thanks MJ. The October poem walk in Laugharne, if you ever have the opportunity, is worth a stroll. There's a spooky sense of Dylan about that walk. Or perhaps it's just the silence of the marsh

Well done, Mac! Quite interesting, those two poems riffing off each other. If you were only going to keep one - and why would you? - it would have to be Playing at Being Dylan, I think. It reads like a stream-lined version of Laugharne.

Thanks David. Of course, Dylan had a habit of switching nouns to verbs, a practice you have some antipathy towards, but that was my excuse here

Thanks again both for the encouragement.

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mac

[Antcliff]

Terrific, Mac. Nicely atmospheric. Nicely connecteing with his noun-verbing.

[Macavity]

Thanks Seth. As you know, the editorial team on this publication have a positive interaction with those that contribute, which makes the outcome that more rewarding,

best

mac

[Ros]

Well done! Interesting poems.

Anyone else struggle with issuu, or do others like the format?

Ros

[Antcliff]

Well done! Interesting poems.

Anyone else struggle with issuu, or do others like the format?

Ros

I'm not hugely fond of issuu.

[Macavity]

Thanks Ross.

They've sent me a pdf version. I'm okay with the format if I use the full screen for issuu.

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mac