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I'm at the top of the list at One Sentence Poems today.

http://www.onesentencepoems.com/osp/
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Wed Jun 21, 2023 4:45 pm

Ah yes, I remember that one Caleb.

Well done! 👍🍾🥂
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Wed Jun 21, 2023 5:07 pm

Congratulations Caleb. I remember this too.

Bw

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Wed Jun 21, 2023 5:19 pm

Thank you, Morpheus and MacPhil. Yes, you should remember it -- I wrote it only a month or two ago!

That poem caused the editor of another site to contact me. She wants poems. Sometimes good things happen.

Morpheus, do you have a first name. Did I know it and then, perhaps, forget it?
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Wed Jun 21, 2023 5:31 pm

Congratulations Caleb.
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Wed Jun 21, 2023 6:40 pm

Caleb, I don't think I've ever shared my first name on the public forum and, if I had, you probably would have forgotten it like you said.

To quote John Clare:

"I am—yet what I am none cares or knows;
My friends forsake me like a memory lost
I am the self-consumer of my woes—
They rise and vanish in oblivious host..."

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Wed Jun 21, 2023 7:29 pm

Congrats, Caleb 👏🤩
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Wed Jun 21, 2023 8:07 pm

Many congrats Celeb. Enjoyed your poem.

Cheers,

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Thanks, everyone. I'm seeing increasing interest in my poems. It is very gratifying.

I'll try to remember your name, Michael.
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Wed Jun 21, 2023 11:41 pm

Fine poem, Caleb, and well done on the follow-up!

Cheers,
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Fri Jun 23, 2023 12:44 am

Thank you, John, though I'm not sure what you mean by "follow-up". If you meant the editor who contacted me, I think I screwed that up. I gave her an honest overview of my poetry, but I may have told her too much.
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I did mean that editor. Best of luck with it all!

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