David in Ink Sweat and Tears

[Macavity]

https://inksweatandtears.co.uk/david-callin-2/

Congratulations David

Phil

[jisbell00]

Lovely, David - well done! I especially like "the kingdom of the corner of the eye."

Cheers,
John

[ray miller]

the kingdom of the corner of the eye.

Yer've still got it, mate.

[CalebPerry]

That's a very good poem, David. "Kingdom of the corner of the eye" is an interesting way to describe those things we think we see, but then disappear when we look right at them.

[David]

Ah, thank ye kindly, Phil. Nice of you to share this. I had forgotten the collegiality here. (It's less well-developed than it used to be, I think, but there are still traces of it.)

Thanks John.

the kingdom of the corner of the eye.

Yer've still got it, mate.

Thanks Ray. This is quite an old one now, so it's probably more accurate to say that, at that time, I still had it. Or, more accurately - and this applies to all of us - I do still have it, but intermittently. It comes and goes, don't it?

And thanks to you too, Caleb. Sorry, I missed your comment the first time around.

Cheers

David

[Morpheus]

Congratulation David,

I may have seen this one out of the corner of my eye in the summer and critiqued it. I'm glad it's been spotted by a quality publication too. I didn't imagine that it was a good poem after all.

[David]

Thanks Morph!

David