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CalebPerry
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Fri Sep 15, 2023 9:35 am

https://pulsebeatpoetry.com/pulsebeat-0 ... y-murdock/

The group was lukewarm about this poem, but this editor liked it.
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Fri Sep 15, 2023 9:37 am

Well done, Caleb!

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Fri Sep 15, 2023 10:06 am

Congratulations Caleb

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Fri Sep 15, 2023 4:36 pm

Congratulations Caleb. I like that one. A rare venture into rhyming for you? I don't remember seeing many others.

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Fri Sep 15, 2023 7:32 pm

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I don't remember seeing this one, Caleb; you must have posted it in 'Experienced'.
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Fri Sep 15, 2023 7:39 pm

Excellent, this is some year you're having Caleb.

I don't recall seeing this poem before either. Perhaps it was posted before I returned from extended sabbatical.
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Fri Sep 15, 2023 10:28 pm

Thank you, everyone. I appreciate the compliments.

At the time the poem was posted, the critique that stuck in my mind was that the poem was saying something that had been said before, meaning that it wasn't original. Of course, every poet has a right to put certain thoughts into his or her own words.

This editor seems to like only rhymed poems. Yes, I have written about eight of those, but not many.

Let me add that when I posted this announcement, I should have included the other PAT members who are also in this issue of Pulsebeat. I just didn't think to scan to list of poets.
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If you don't like the black theme, it is easy to switch to a lighter color. Just ask me how.
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.
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