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CalebPerry
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Wed Nov 01, 2023 11:15 am

First, I'm sorry I haven't been participating for most of the week. I wasn't feeling well.

I have a poem in Mobius:

http://mobiusmagazine.com/poetry/someareb.html

The group mostly liked this poem.
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Wed Nov 01, 2023 12:01 pm

That's a fine poem, Caleb, and to the point. I'm glad you shared it (and published it!), and hope you feel better soon.

Cheers,
John
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Wed Nov 01, 2023 1:02 pm

Thank you, John.

I just saw a new cardiologist, so I'm feeling hopeful. The last cardiologist had recommended a nuclear stress test, in which they inject radiation into your veins and then photograph your circulatory system. I resisted doing it for a year, and then my last cardiologist retired. The new cardiologist says I don't need the test, which is interesting.
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Wed Nov 01, 2023 1:19 pm

Interesting and most welcome! I am a great fan of second opinions, doctors generally do come up with them in my own experience. :)

I am glad to hear things may be looking up.

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John
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Wed Nov 01, 2023 2:22 pm

Well done Caleb!

Congrats

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Wed Nov 01, 2023 11:34 pm

Thank you, Phil!
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