The Streets

Any closet novelists, short story writers, script-writers or prose poets out there?
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Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:00 pm

Cry me baby cry me an ocean. I have drowned in my tears no more of
what can I fear? Going down, down, down, down down.

The years prolong the agony of my wait. Heaven or hell awaits me
in Light or darkness the stark reality is unfolding while the clouds hide
my rain. The Angels say all right Dave, while the demons drag me to hell for waiting pleasure to bite my skin and tear this flesh apart again.

But I will not let it break my soul. Down down down and down.

Best wishes to all, and thank you so much for your kindness and your help.
I am sorry I am in no way as beautiful as you guys and girls. If I live through
next year I will promise to be with all.

I have learnt much being with you all. More about myself than I could

Leon Russel : in memory of his song, "down down down down down"... to know me as a fool without the light of his genius.

May the light always shine with you.



I like you guys, I do





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:30 pm

Best wishes to you, Dave.

David
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 11:52 pm

Thanks man.I have always liked you truly David. Special for me. Really.

I have read all your pieces and some are brilliant the only way to compare them is a John Keats, or
Byron. I have never seen anything like it in this world.

Keep it on David. If at any time you feel the need to say or speak In some way I am always there for you
dear David. Always behind you.

Layla...."turn the whole world upside down to ease my worried mind"

I love Clapton

Thanks
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