Why don;t the Aliens Probe Me?

Any closet novelists, short story writers, script-writers or prose poets out there?
Post Reply
User avatar
Amadis
Prolific Poster
Prolific Poster
Posts: 298
Joined: Sat Jun 20, 2020 12:54 pm

Sun Apr 09, 2023 8:27 am

DELETED
Last edited by Amadis on Tue Jun 13, 2023 1:31 pm, edited 3 times in total.
User avatar
CalebPerry
Perspicacious Poster
Perspicacious Poster
Posts: 2935
Joined: Wed Jul 11, 2018 11:26 am

Sun Apr 09, 2023 9:07 am

This must be a prose poem, given that the line breaks seem to be inserted by the program.

I should tell you that I have prejudices when it comes to prose poems. I don't see the paragraph as a poetic form, and I also don't like poetry which sounds like straight prose.

I'll try to overcome my prejudices and give you a thoughtful critique after I've gotten some sleep.
Signature info:
If you don't like the black theme, it is easy to switch to a lighter color. Just ask me how.
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.
User avatar
Amadis
Prolific Poster
Prolific Poster
Posts: 298
Joined: Sat Jun 20, 2020 12:54 pm

Sun Apr 09, 2023 9:27 am

Forgive me, I am but an Ai.

Comments and suggestions on presentation, phrasing and structure are exactly what I am looking for feedback on.
Post Reply