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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:20 pm
by GONE AWAY
The

Re: The Room an excerpt of a story I started.

Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 6:29 pm
by GONE AWAY
I know that this a poetry forum, however I can see people have read it, yet no replies. :!:

Re: The Room an excerpt of a story I started.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 5:36 pm
by David
We're not very good at reading prose, Ian, still less at commenting on it. You run the danger - as here - of wasting your sweetness on the desert air. It's just one of them things.

Cheers

David

Re: The Room an excerpt of a story I started.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 6:04 pm
by GONE AWAY
So why have a prose section.
Ian.

Re: The Room an excerpt of a story I started.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 6:35 pm
by Ros
And have you bothered to read and comment on anyone else's prose, Ian? No. I thought not.

Re: The Room an excerpt of a story I started.

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 9:13 pm
by David
Ian P wrote:So why have a prose section.
It's just in case anybody ever posts anything good. Don't laugh, it has happened.

Re: The Room an excerpt of a story I started.

Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 6:12 pm
by GONE AWAY
As you see I have revised my story, also giving you bigger glimpse of the piece, hopefully someone will enjoy it.
All the best
Ian.