man

[gavin]

immense suffering can to others be deeply cynical

but still the brain gravitates, it wants to drizzle its brain oi

over the bayonet to slash forward one's way in life.

there is also many meditative modes, with the perilous imbalance

one can be a hand full of ash thrown into the air which disappears on the wind.

there is no intermediate level because you live either a furnace of reckless energies

there is no relief from the cold it bring and very abruptly take you into the under-world,

[Jackie]

Gavin, I want to understand this but I am having trouble with the nouns and verbs making sense together. For example,

immense suffering can to others be deeply cynical

. I am aware of people being cynical, but I don't understand how suffering can be. And in

the brain gravitates, it wants to drizzle its brain

, I am having trouble seeing how a brain can do something to its brain. Perhaps you could revise it?

Jackie