The Bully

[hodgepodge]

I am new to this. This poem is original. This is more of a spoken word poem, but I would still like feedback. This is the first poem I have every wrote. Free verse/prose, and it's kinda long but please read the whole thing lol. PS it may be a little confusing....I don't know much about poetic techniques so I am eager to read some of your guy's constructive criticism.

The Bully-
The bully gets up and stares at his next victim
"Look at yourself, you are the trifecta-
ugly, stupid, and weak
get yourself together, u are an incompetent, self-serving,
unresponsible human beeing that should be demolished from this world
so lets talk specifically about your problems
u only take selfies when you draw anti-art on your face seeking
to hide your ugly-marks, your pimples, your chapped lips, and
your droopy eyes. when will you recognize that make-up makes you
look down. dont try to hold back your tears because your eyes are like
geysers so you must let them flow. the tears you cry remind me of the flood that God has sent. u r hoping to wipe out all the evil in the world but you must recognize that Noah's ark has already set sail and you are not a passenger. maybe your ugliness could be cured by God but you have turned your back to him way too many times i think there is no way to make youurself look beautiful because you are eternally ugly

ok enough of your looks, lets talk abouot ur mind
you are so stupid that u can bareli spell
ur brain only works as good as a monkey's
how stupid are you? you say "you is" instead of "you are"
do you even now grammer?
how dumb are you that you cant see that you should live a normal life
no wonder you dropped out of school, becuase you will never be smart

you know wat lets go back to your looks
your body is soo small like dude you are frail
i can buy your arms with a side of meatballs at an italian restuarant
if you get sentenced to jail you might just end up pregnant
you idiot dont you know you will never survive
even though you feel alive im warning you to strive to revive those muscles
but i know you wont, because you are weak

u are weak not only physically, but emotionally
u cry all the time when someone slightly hurts you
u are the biggest hypocrite, making fun of others all the time,
well now it's your turn to get bullied, maybe now you will understand
that you are not the victim, maybe now you will see how much pain you have caused, maybe now you will open your eyes and not be blinded by
the tv light that has turned you into a slave u imbesile
maybe now you will see the sea sparkling and you will appreciate how
great everything is around u, but maybe now you will see that you do not belong in this world
listen man, u might as well kill yourself...you are a worthless human being, you do not deserve to live..you must die..maybe now you realize
what you must do and stop crying."

"Yess I do," responds the victim.
The bully looks away from the mirror, aims the gun at the victim's head
and commits suicide.

[Ros]

Also posted in Beginners, so I suggest we keep the comments to that forum.