Poetry Forum

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This must be a prose poem, given that the line breaks seem to be inserted by the program.

I should tell you that I have prejudices when it comes to prose poems. I don't see the paragraph as a poetic form, and I also don't like poetry which sounds like straight prose.

I'll try to overcome my prejudices and give you a thoughtful critique after I've gotten some sleep.

Forgive me, I am but an Ai.

Comments and suggestions on presentation, phrasing and structure are exactly what I am looking for feedback on.