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jeremyyoung
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Sat Mar 01, 2014 2:48 pm

Lapsed poet, in the wild and windy north, returning to the fold.
The Blue Book, now available on Kindle.
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Sat Mar 01, 2014 3:01 pm

Hello and welcome.
Rules round here request you critique 2 poems to every 1 you post, so please get stuck in. I'd post a link to the guidelines but I'm on my phone and it's a pain in the arse. I'm sure someone will point you in that direction in due course.

Happy poeming.

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jeremyyoung
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Sat Mar 01, 2014 10:03 pm

Thank you.
The Blue Book, now available on Kindle.
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Sun Mar 02, 2014 6:40 pm

Hello, Jeremy...welcome to PG. Welcome aboard. :D


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Sun Mar 02, 2014 8:23 pm

Hi Jeremy. I seem to see that you've had a slightly rough baptism so far, but don't let that put you off. We're all (ahem, mostly) sweeties really.

Cheers

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Sun Mar 02, 2014 11:28 pm

I retract my welcome.

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