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KevJ
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Fri Nov 28, 2014 7:40 pm

Take another breath
A lung full of winter air
And share with a kiss
I am not a number ... I am a FREE man!
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Sat Nov 29, 2014 8:42 pm

And share with a kiss
This historical moment
That is filled with bliss
Just because you're paranoid it doesn't mean they're not out to get you.
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Sun Nov 30, 2014 6:20 am

That is filled with bliss.
This is filled with blatt. Thus this
piffle agitates.
fine words butter no parsnips
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Sun Nov 30, 2014 3:33 pm

Piffle agitates
the hydrochloric acid
causing belly ache
Just because you're paranoid it doesn't mean they're not out to get you.
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Tue Dec 02, 2014 3:47 pm

Causing belly ache
is prime motive for sadists.
Better eat some chalk.
Just because you're paranoid it doesn't mean they're not out to get you.
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Wed Dec 03, 2014 6:35 pm

Better eat some chalk.
Cheese offers a great contrast -
You might want a drink.
Just because you're paranoid it doesn't mean they're not out to get you.
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Fri Dec 05, 2014 6:42 pm

you might want a drink
better make it a softie
if you’re in Scotland
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Tue Dec 09, 2014 1:13 am

If you're in Scotland
Yet he walks under snowmen -
Abominable.
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Sun Dec 14, 2014 10:56 am

abominable …
your gifts, your family and
the Christmas weather
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Wed Dec 24, 2014 4:02 am

The Christmas weather:
cables prickling with ice,
coyote prints in snow.
fine words butter no parsnips
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Thu Dec 25, 2014 5:56 pm

A beautiful seasonal image, k-j.
Merry Christmas.


coyote prints in snow
trying to find the “up” side
in a lone wolf state
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Fri Dec 26, 2014 5:44 am

Thanks Og, happy xmas to you too.

In a lone-wolf state
hoofprints and two bootprints by
a new-vanished gulch.
fine words butter no parsnips
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Fri Jan 09, 2015 7:42 pm

A new - vanished gulch?
Here on Mars once water flowed
In time erosion
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Fri Jan 23, 2015 5:29 pm

In time erosion
Tunnel vision as far
As the eye can see
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Wed Jan 28, 2015 10:34 pm

as the eye can see
but the fingers cannot touch
so the mouth may taste
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Fri Jan 30, 2015 6:39 pm

so the mouth may taste
poison on your honeyed lips
I, probing with tongue
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Sat Jan 31, 2015 11:15 pm

I, probing with tongue
savour the exotic taste
of home-made hummus
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Sun Feb 22, 2015 5:20 pm

of home-made hummus
and men … kitchen drama and
a Greek tragedy
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Wed Feb 25, 2015 9:58 pm

A Greek tragedy.
Man, a being in search of
perfect baklava.
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Fri Feb 27, 2015 9:36 pm

perfect baklava
a sweetmeat that will work on
so many levels
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Wed Mar 04, 2015 6:43 pm

So many levels
People in the penthouse
Rats in the basement
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Sun Mar 22, 2015 10:52 pm

Rats in the base meant
untrustworthy conscripts
eventually
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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eventually
time and gravity will beat
anti-wrinkle cream
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Fri Apr 03, 2015 11:56 am

Anti-wrinkle cream
Doesn't work on linen skirts
Please read the label!
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Please read the label:
Your Easter Eggs always find
Humpty Dumpty days!
Long time a child and still a child
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