Angels 2 (contains profanity)

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mick
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Sat May 27, 2006 7:06 pm

As we gathered around his grave,
the Sun cast a hint-of-a-ray,
from total obscurity.
Some distant, half-forgotten cousin said,
"Look, the angels are smiling on him."
Another thought,
"And if it had been raining,
the angels would be crying for him,
Not pissing on him!"
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Sat May 27, 2006 7:15 pm

That's not profanity - that's funny

The end stitches up the rest, stitched me up too.

nice one

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Sat May 27, 2006 7:52 pm

Here you are Kris, some religious poetry.

(I laughed too mick)
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Sat May 27, 2006 9:11 pm

Yes. excellent use of profanity there. One did have a good giggle over that. excellent! Ta!
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