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Ros
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Then why are you here?
Rosencrantz: What are you playing at? Guildenstern: Words. Words. They're all we have to go on.
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ray miller
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Brilliant use of metaphor.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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nar
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I would agree, if only I had the time to waste here; sadly I don't.
Only one nit from me (it's in S1 / L1, I think)...
perhaps "a perfect waste of time" would be better?
Just a thought.
See you around (or not)
Only one nit from me (it's in S1 / L1, I think)...
perhaps "a perfect waste of time" would be better?
Just a thought.
See you around (or not)
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
I concur. Every second spent here is lost forever. Tick tock, tick tock - and so Death moves closer. His scythe will, inexorably, swing in our direction.
In the meantime, I'm happy to fart about on this poetry forum. Big kiss! x
In the meantime, I'm happy to fart about on this poetry forum. Big kiss! x