Haiku Train

[Boat]

Good for chewing too
preferably after dark,
fangs aint what they used to be.

Edit: I've messed up. Which has led to Pauline messing up. My fault entirely. I finished my last line with seven syllables instead of five...I'm a twit.

Can I change the last line to 'with my dentures in'?

[Pauline]

Fangs ain't what they used to be.
Sugar stole my smile.
There's not a bar in the grate.

[ton321]

There's not a bar in the grate.
Rain has issued its final demands-
wet leaves like letters.

[Boat]

Wet leaves like letters,
like letters soaked in fat blood.
High cholesterol.

[Katherine]

High cholesterol –
A new thing to scare us all,
back in the 80's.

[nar]

Backin' the eighties
stars was brilliant, better than
Sat alight of Love...

[k-j]

Sat alight of Love:
tell Emma tree is fruiting
like a mushroom farm.

[Boat]

Like a mushroom farm,
just keep piling on the shit.
Sit and watch 'em bloom.

[trobbo44]

Dog upon my lap
Cat purring in the corner
Goldfish swims in bowl

[TonyMac]

Goldfish swims in bowl
each time he passes a rock
says that's a surprise

[Crayon]

Like a mushroom farm,
just keep piling on the shit.
Sit and watch 'em bloom.

sit and watch them bloom
till the ages weary truth ~
remembrance condemns

[Pauline]

Remembrance condemns
your slurred whisperings of love
as a health hazzard.

[k-j]

As a health hazard
it's hard to improve upon
eating yellow snow.

[Crayon]

eating yellow snow ~
a gateway habit that ends
in golden showers

[JJWilliamson]

In golden showers
I placed my frizzante trust.
It's piss poor vino.

[Crayon]

it's piss poor vino
for the remains of our days ~
celebration's end

[JJWilliamson]

Celebration's end
toss pots and mornings brighten
shake their heady days

[sphynx]

shake their heady days
of ale and debauchery -
now their taps are bare

[bjondon]

now their taps are bare
uncloaked messages spilling
from my crystal set

[Macavity]

from my crystal set
fractured faces fire islanders'
fears of winter nights

[sleepystupid]

fears of winter nights
deciduous signs, beware
they always know first.

[Luce]

they always know first
when to hatch or stay low
in the still water

[sleepystupid]

in the still water
an ingress of chemicals
we reap what we sow.

[Macavity]

we reap what we sow
in graveyard soil made fertile
with bone symmetry

[JJWilliamson]

With bone symmetry
the three bears construct
a grisly house.