Rapture
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My sonnet "Rapture", which was workshopped here, has managed a first place in November's IBPC competition.
http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/
Thanks to everyone for the great comments and suggestions along the way.
JJ
http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/
Thanks to everyone for the great comments and suggestions along the way.
JJ
Long time a child and still a child
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Congrats JJ
(I think she may have a point about the title )
Regards, Not
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Congrats JJ
(I think she may have a point about the title )
Regards, Not
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Thank you very much, Tristan, Sid, mac and Not, for the kind replies. Appreciated.
Yes, I think the title could do with a nudge, Not. Agreed.
JJ
Yes, I think the title could do with a nudge, Not. Agreed.
JJ
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Brilliant news JJ!
As soon as I saw the title it immediately evoked the poem - partly I think because that is the word the N himself would
use, though only in private to himself - and it made me think of the open lakeland 'a's too.
Best,
Jules
As soon as I saw the title it immediately evoked the poem - partly I think because that is the word the N himself would
use, though only in private to himself - and it made me think of the open lakeland 'a's too.
Best,
Jules
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Thank you very much, Jules. Your comments are spot on. Appreciated.
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Thanks Seth. Appreciated.
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Well one, JJ. I don't imagine many sonnets get entered in the IBPC.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Thanks, Ray
yes, and it's the second sonnet of mine to take 1st place. I managed the first one a couple of years ago. Nobody was more surprised than me.
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yes, and it's the second sonnet of mine to take 1st place. I managed the first one a couple of years ago. Nobody was more surprised than me.
JJ
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