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Green Silk Journal have published 'Christmas Gifts' which was workshopped here a few years ago.

https://www.thegsj.com/poetry-4-fall-2022.html
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Tue Nov 01, 2022 4:30 am

Congratulations Eira 🍾
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Tue Nov 01, 2022 5:31 am

What a lovely, lovely poem that is. Sad ending. Congratulations, Eira.
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Tue Nov 01, 2022 12:36 pm

Well done, Eira. I remember that poem.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Tue Nov 01, 2022 12:53 pm

Congratulations Eira, about time!
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Tue Nov 01, 2022 10:47 pm

Hooray! Congratulations, Eira; I love your poem :D

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Macavity wrote:
Tue Nov 01, 2022 4:30 am
Congratulations Eira 🍾
Thanks Phil :D
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CalebPerry wrote:
Tue Nov 01, 2022 5:31 am
What a lovely, lovely poem that is. Sad ending. Congratulations, Eira.
Thank you, Caleb. So glad you enjoyed this one (about my mother)
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ray miller wrote:
Tue Nov 01, 2022 12:36 pm
Well done, Eira. I remember that poem.
Thanks Ray - I'm surprised you remember it as it was workshopped years ago :D
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NotQuiteSure wrote:
Tue Nov 01, 2022 12:53 pm
Congratulations Eira, about time!
Thanks Not. Yes I have sat on this one for a long time :roll: :D
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Leaf wrote:
Tue Nov 01, 2022 10:47 pm
Hooray! Congratulations, Eira; I love your poem :D

Best wishes,
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Thanks Fliss, so glad you enjoyed this one. :D

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Sun Nov 13, 2022 12:20 pm

Congratulations, Eira. Such a moving poem and well deserved.

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