Tonight
My style Mac. I really like descriptive narrative. I understood it on the first read which means 10/10.
It could be read aloud in one of those gravelly type voices for a horror film trailer.
You are right David. I like spiders and can't tolerate the cretins that stamp on them.
Nice piece for Halloween.
It could be read aloud in one of those gravelly type voices for a horror film trailer.
You are right David. I like spiders and can't tolerate the cretins that stamp on them.
Nice piece for Halloween.
'Thanks guys. I, of course, treat spiders with the respect they deserve.' -
And I should think so too.
This is a poem to read to kids, comfortably threatening, but not enough to cause arachnophobia - Could be a problem for those who already have it though - Best to read it in the dark.
nice one
Barrie
And I should think so too.
This is a poem to read to kids, comfortably threatening, but not enough to cause arachnophobia - Could be a problem for those who already have it though - Best to read it in the dark.
nice one
Barrie
Worms always remind me of graves, how about slugs?
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i liked the poem, found it soothingly threatening. i keep coming back to it and i have to reread it. that means it pretty good in my humble opinion.
[quote]weaving silken pillows [/quote]
[quote]curling asleep in his teddy bear dreams.[/quote]
these were probably my faviorte lines.
i looked up that sight... wierd, interesting, its bugs, it would probably interst my brother
[quote]weaving silken pillows [/quote]
[quote]curling asleep in his teddy bear dreams.[/quote]
these were probably my faviorte lines.
i looked up that sight... wierd, interesting, its bugs, it would probably interst my brother