New Poem : HELLO MR RISIN

[bonza]

Hello Mr Risin


hello mr risin
did you break on through
just like your song
or was it the end ?

did you choose to go?
cos i think you did
was it all too much
or perhaps not enough?

they made you rock
your mind was poetic
a colourful brain
under the influence

one last trip mr Risin
a ticket to another land
or maybe the finish line?
i wish i knew

permanent damage
or enlightenment forever?
why did you go Mr Mojo Risin
who knows, who knows

BY J.USHER[/u]

[cameron]

To me, this is much more interesting. Lighter in tone but far more effective. Would make a great song lyric. (Maybe it is already?)

C

[bonza]

Hi Cameron,the poems about Jim Morrison of The Doors, Mr Mojo Risin is what he called himself at some point during his life(anagram of Jim Morrison). Jim longed to be a poet and moved to France only to die of a drug overdose shortly after. Thanks again Cameron , i have never wrote a poem like this before and its down to you for pointing me in theright direction. cheers

[the stranger]

nice idea for a poem, music is so inspiring,

I managed to get Break on through and The end, are there any more Doors songs I missed?

good poem.

[bonza]

"Touch me "(on the Soft Parade album). Thanks for the feedback friend.

[bonza]

I was tired last night and misunderstood your question, the only Doors song titles used were those two that you mentioned. thanks