Another night has passed, and still we are apart.
I miss you.
Are you are thinking of me, wherever you are?
Do you miss me, in your mysterious absence?
Surely you remember the first time our eyes met;
I waited so long to get your attention!
Do not despair, my love, I shall see you again soon.
I will be perched in the willow tree tonight,
just outside your window.
Perhaps, dearest, you will see me as well.
Stargazing...still.
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I keep not wanting to like this - its simple and could tend to soppy but I am trapped by the sinister undertones and can't wait for Stargazing III.
Small points - absence misspelled and extra "are" in line 3
Elphin
I keep not wanting to like this - its simple and could tend to soppy but I am trapped by the sinister undertones and can't wait for Stargazing III.
Small points - absence misspelled and extra "are" in line 3
Elphin
Last edited by Elphin on Fri Oct 19, 2007 5:56 pm, edited 2 times in total.
….or are you going to fetch it back 
….?..