Beer Goggles
You were
The plainest Jane
At seven.
By nine
you were
quite frankly
divine.
At ten I was
moved by lust
to have you
that night
was a must.
I patiently
waited
till twelve
was struck
to move
and chance
my lusty luck.
Induced by
hops and yeast,
I viewed you
as my
delicate
feast.
Unzip
Unfold
Enter
Caress
In the
Drunken
Mess
Undress
Euphoria
A phantasmagoria
No-less.
I awoke
at eight,
discovered
you’d gone.
I suppose
You
too
Had
Goggles
On.
Beer Goggles
It reminds me of of Chuck Berry's Thirteen Question Method in a funny sort of way -
Question number one: you wanna have fun, uh hun
Question number two: what to do ?
Let’s see!
Question number three: wanna go out and eat burger with me ?
God almighty!
For the thirteen question method is the one to use
Now the question number five: don’t give me no jive this morning
Question number six: don’t try no tricks, this evening
Question number seven: I’ll pick you up at a quarter to eleven, baby
And question number eight: it’s a date
It's not a new theme but you've managed to put your own stamp of originality on it. I would say drop the article before phantasmagoria.
I like it - good one
Barrie
Question number one: you wanna have fun, uh hun
Question number two: what to do ?
Let’s see!
Question number three: wanna go out and eat burger with me ?
God almighty!
For the thirteen question method is the one to use
Now the question number five: don’t give me no jive this morning
Question number six: don’t try no tricks, this evening
Question number seven: I’ll pick you up at a quarter to eleven, baby
And question number eight: it’s a date
It's not a new theme but you've managed to put your own stamp of originality on it. I would say drop the article before phantasmagoria.
I like it - good one
Barrie
After letting go of branches and walking through the ape gait, we managed to grasp what hands were really for......
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Not often I laugh out loud at a poem but this one did it!It made for an uncomfortable start, though, as I began believing age rather than time was being referred to, as most people will, I guess. Hops and yeast / Hopes and rising? I thought it was great. Isn't there a great deal of sexual innuendo on this site at the moment? I blame the moderators.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
I'm all too familiar with the sentiment, except i usually get the one who doesnt leave before i wake up..
great bit of fun this mate
harrison
great bit of fun this mate
harrison
Aren't people absurd! They never use the freedoms they do have but demand those they don't have; they have freedom of thought, they demand freedom of speech.
Nice one merlin
Unfortunately I can relate to some of this, but then wisdom acquired through the passage of life teaches us that personality is the most important thing to look for.
I enjoyed
Danté
Unfortunately I can relate to some of this, but then wisdom acquired through the passage of life teaches us that personality is the most important thing to look for.
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I enjoyed
Danté
to anticipate touching what is unseen seems far more interesting than seeing what the hand can not touch
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Oh dear
hmmmm this is a fiesty little number Merlin..had to laugh coz I thought the numbers were ages (doh)
thought aye aye he was an early starter...yup fell for that one
made me laugh thanks...
Mes
hmmmm this is a fiesty little number Merlin..had to laugh coz I thought the numbers were ages (doh)
thought aye aye he was an early starter...yup fell for that one
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made me laugh thanks...
Mes
Thanks everyone for looking in...
Barrie - Yeah - well worn theme...tried to be as original as poss...thanks for your suggestion, agree to drop the article...
Ray - Pleased you had a laugh - I don't know why but I often start poems seriously and end up turning them into a humourous write...the age thing wasn't intentional, but more a by-product....but of course, I saw it immediately as I was writing it...
Pits - thats a nightmare....you want them to be gone , don't you!...lol
Dante - yeah - I knew you would have tee-shirt...
Mesmie - Gary Glitter - holy furk!
Mick - pleased you enjoyed it.... I hark back to them good old days sometimes...
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Barrie - Yeah - well worn theme...tried to be as original as poss...thanks for your suggestion, agree to drop the article...
![Cool 8)](./images/smilies/icon_cool.gif)
Ray - Pleased you had a laugh - I don't know why but I often start poems seriously and end up turning them into a humourous write...the age thing wasn't intentional, but more a by-product....but of course, I saw it immediately as I was writing it...
![Embarassed :oops:](./images/smilies/icon_redface.gif)
Pits - thats a nightmare....you want them to be gone , don't you!...lol
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Dante - yeah - I knew you would have tee-shirt...
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Mesmie - Gary Glitter - holy furk!
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Mick - pleased you enjoyed it.... I hark back to them good old days sometimes...
![Evil or Very Mad :evil:](./images/smilies/icon_evil.gif)
![Idea :idea:](./images/smilies/icon_idea.gif)
Well done with this. I like the layout; sort of gives the impression of the night moving along and the magical transformation of 'plainest Jane'. Show me a man who hasn't been there and I'll show you a fibber!
Funny and true - who could ask for anything more.
Jimmy
Funny and true - who could ask for anything more.
Jimmy