(A Haiku)
Sundial
Light accentuates
contours of her pubic bone;
my shadow finds time.
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Sundial
Mixed the thoughts and images pretty intelligently here.
Bow!
Bow!
Yes, the images contrast / complement each other nicely!
Cheers,
Jon
Cheers,
Jon
Barrie,
I am really chuffed that you have shown your appreciation of this poem.
It was well thought over regading the wording, I am glad it was worth the effort.
Thanks Mick, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the reply.
Aru, Haiku is not my usual form, but I´ve enjoyed so many of your short forms I decided to have a go with short forms to help tighten my writing, glad this worked.
Jon,
Thanks, I appreciate your reading and taking time to reply.
Ilex
Thank you, hope to read some more of your about the place,
Many thanks
Tim
I am really chuffed that you have shown your appreciation of this poem.
It was well thought over regading the wording, I am glad it was worth the effort.
Thanks Mick, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the reply.
Aru, Haiku is not my usual form, but I´ve enjoyed so many of your short forms I decided to have a go with short forms to help tighten my writing, glad this worked.
Jon,
Thanks, I appreciate your reading and taking time to reply.
Ilex
Thank you, hope to read some more of your about the place,
Many thanks
Tim
to anticipate touching what is unseen seems far more interesting than seeing what the hand can not touch