Notting Hill Carnival

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moniquejade
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Sun Sep 04, 2005 9:38 am

Open your eyes!
Welcome to de parade of prides
cook-up to sell causin smoke ta rise
as whisle an horn blowin from all sides
Speakers boomin
Plenty drinkin
Heat wit dust and smell consumin
Truck after truck comin roun de corna
sexy gyal sey "meh name ent 'dahlin' mista is Laura"
Revelers winin
Steelpan jammin
Homemade costumes shakin and shinin
Flags and hands wavin
catchin a vibe to de Soca riddim
Feelin de scene
so de crowd dem scream
when de DJ shouts dey country name
People dancin in front and dey dancin behine
as onlookers sing, chant and lime
bottle and stick makin a groove
in an atmosphere wit notin to prove
Clear out a space
Get off meh case
Metal and bars wont hold meh in place
I eh takin a chance
watch meh jump an dance
doh watch how ah small
but make room fuh meh advance
Man we all anti-crime
listen to dis rhyme
Take notes from dis festival of unity one-time!

copyright (c) monique anderson Aug 05
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Mon Sep 05, 2005 2:14 am

Welcome to the forum Monique,

I guess this would sound great with the correct accent, more of a performance piece perhaps.
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Mon Sep 05, 2005 2:57 am

Thanks Camus, Your so right, It is fun for me to read, its a bit musical but it also might be cliche in some parts, not too sure. best wishes - mj :)
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Mon Sep 05, 2005 3:32 am

boonoonoonoos sista gyal, rittin lak sinting inna yard, fi reel.

gwan watch fi de samfy man a dem carnevals.


Well done. Good beat.
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Mon Sep 05, 2005 8:52 am

tanks tanks! :D Big up
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Mon Sep 05, 2005 3:56 pm

your speaking jamaican though...
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Tue Sep 06, 2005 1:25 pm

yes. I know. its as close as I come to Trinidad. Forgive the difference.
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Tue Sep 06, 2005 1:33 pm

:D of course. hehee bouyaca![/u][/code][/quote]
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