Marshmallow Angel

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Asbo1
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Sun Sep 18, 2005 3:21 pm

Noticeably nutty you are slightly spicy
Melt like buttter you flow like cream
Love the taste of you love
I'm in a caramel whirl!
Derek
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Mon Sep 19, 2005 5:05 pm

It amazes me what people can write about. So much to write about. I like this poem and this site is so much fun. Poems for every minute of the day or night.
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dillingworth
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Mon Sep 19, 2005 7:05 pm

this is small but perfectly formed.
Robert Davidson
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Tue Sep 27, 2005 2:32 am

A delightful ditty that's terribly witty.

Robert Davidson.
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