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Jasper
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Thu May 28, 2009 2:30 pm

Dick heads from France
Floats between starling twilight--
Climidic zone
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Thu May 28, 2009 2:43 pm

Jasper

I hope you have reached the end of a very long and tedious goodbye.

Mods, can you do us all a favour and ban this idiot.
"This is going to be a damn masterpiece, when I finish dis..." - Poeterry
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Thu May 28, 2009 3:22 pm

Jasper wrote:Dick heads from France
Floats between starling twilight--
Climidic zone
:?:
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Thu May 28, 2009 3:25 pm

FROM France? Mais non!
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Thu May 28, 2009 7:20 pm

Oskar wrote: Jasper

I hope you have reached the end of a very long and tedious goodbye.

Mods, can you do us all a favour and ban this idiot.
He's been given a one week suspension. If/when he comes back, and assuming he be's a bad boy, please don't hesitate to contact one of us or report the post, etc. Action will be swift.
There's only one rule in street and bar fights: maximum violence, instantly. (Martin Amis, "Money")
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Fri May 29, 2009 8:27 am

WAR IS PEACE
FREEDOM IS SLAVERY
IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH

Left.. Right.. Left.. Right.. Left.. Right
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Fri Jun 05, 2009 1:24 pm

Does that too mean bad is good, C. *smirk*
Banned for a week for this tame kitten?
I reckon it were more for my very slack syllable count in L3?

I can fix it up if you'd really- really like me too!

J
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Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:26 pm

Jasper

This has to be read carefully to get the content.
If you stick around perhaps you could unravel it so I can confirm or forget my ideas about this.

This is a decent place to work and like every other board it is impossible for everyone to
find total accord with everyone else.

I am all for diversity in these places, it is part of the fabric.
It´s not good to see people get barred, I am hoping you will manage to contribute without
giving people cause to question the value of your contribution.

I am personally neutral and would rather just get on with the poetry, please don´t be a pain
as my neutrality has limits and I feel confident that others who have remained neutral
are of a similar mind. I would like to think that mutual respect is not hoping for too much.

I thought about a private message, but I am happy to be out in the open
and you seem to have already given me cause to think that´s how you prefer to operate.

Regards

Danté
to anticipate touching what is unseen seems far more interesting than seeing what the hand can not touch
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Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:19 pm

When one throws a stone at me, D, I simply laugh and throw one back!
Albeit a compact stone, this, it weighs a ton and spreads wide to capture all those who'd provoke my quills!

As for your being neutral, thou surely jest! Otherwise you'd have no interest whatsoever in contact (personal or otherwise) with lil old moi on any topic...now would you!

I'm a ground theorist by self-ply and formal learning. And I really love to study ants as each and every one has its own little quirk/s if one is prepared to look closely and for long enough! And I know what scares them too!

What will be will be... as neither you nor I can control nor change our environments in any way, nor in any medium. (Spinoza)
Poets are at their best when placed amongst their worst! Now just get on with your job and I'll attend to mine... regardless!


Thanks for sermon, D, but I'm already self-sacrificing as I gave at the door prior entry to life!

Your friend always

J

The suicidal Nihilist...

PS: think about it as a philosophy and you might eventually figure me out!

BTW: tis a solid write this (other than the missing syll in line 3.... I simply played on climate and travel. Heads is the key to their dislike of it btw...no more nor less!
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Fri Jun 05, 2009 8:19 pm

Seeds. I’m seeing seeds adrift .. and then dickheads who shoot starlings (and other small birds) en masse by way of whimsical culinary delight … i know we’re largely carnivores (by practice if not design – humans long since made a choice and mass slaughter seems to be it) … like that Tudor thing of shoving the carcasses of many inside each other? It was a display of wealth, power and total arrogance – one in the eye of Nature … like ha! What does she know ... my arrow’s bigger than hers anyway …

I’m probably seeing this all wrong but there ya go lol

And btw starling twilight is gorgeous

Climidic is tricky … climatic? Chlamydia? Both? Then i’m thinking a whole other thing about std’s but i’m still angry about bird-kill … oh, and maybe that’s it? How we destroy each other?

oh, and isn't mouldy rye hallucinogenic? some atheists assert the whole/any/all religious frenzy emerged from minds affected by this ... dunno, just a wildseed thought association ...

Thank god it’s Friday and i have wine .. that way i can excuse having made something completely other of this than you intended *grin

Good to see you, my love … *s

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Sat Jun 06, 2009 12:36 pm

Of course starling twilight is gorgeous... I invented it (I think) for thou in Molluscs, remember?
Why is it that your intuition always blows my hat off... now susshhhh as this mob took it personally.
Dick's a detective too btw. And she is always on the bottom of the heap being tampered with by cowards above!

I can invent a word if I damn well like... why the hell not?

Thank you, you... but not for exposing it to the real ID's here... and just you wait till I get you home, one day, I'll show you seeds rofl

J

Knew I should've called it Quail... or maybe Squab?
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Sat Jun 06, 2009 1:37 pm

Jasper wrote: I can invent a word if I damn well like... why the hell not?
No reason at all. But how am I supposed to know what you mean by it? That's the tricky bit.

How do I know you're using it right?

Does it have a synonym?

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Sat Jun 06, 2009 2:21 pm

You ought to trust your intuition first and foremost, big fella, rather than rely on neurotics!
Obviously there is too much scar tissue here (before I came) for me to feel comfortable enough to open my box of tricks sts!

Tis sad, David! Sad for you lot whom'd ban me on a whim rather than faith! And spare that trust is earned BS as it's based on the fallacy of a god/inferiority/ complex to begin with!

All men/women are liars
I'm a man/woman
Now I wish to tell the truth

Will I tell the truth or not?

I solved this and Sorites in but a minute! But then I'm an existentialist... like all good Socratic nihilists/fleas should be!

J
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Sat Jun 06, 2009 2:24 pm

If I'd used Paris in line one... you'd of though Paris Hilton, right? RIGHT!

Wrong!

Paris

A prince of Troy in classical mythology, whose abduction of the Greek queen Helen caused the Trojan War (see Helen of Troy and Judgment of Paris). Paris (or, according to some stories, Apollo disguised as Paris) killed Achilles by piercing his heel with an arrow.


France (frāns, fräɴs)
French critic and writer of sophisticated, often satirical short stories and novels, including Penguin Island (1908). He won the 1921 Nobel Prize for literature.


There's also a group of Monks whom make a nice Rye in France

2. the seeds or grain of this plant, used for making flour and whiskey, and as a livestock feed.

Char⋅treuse  [shahr-trooz, -troos; Fr. shar-trœz]
–noun
1. an aromatic liqueur, usually yellow or green, made by the Carthusian monks at Grenoble, France, and, at one time, at Tarragona, Spain.
2. (lowercase) a clear, light green with a yellowish tinge.

Shelly was right to be punch drunk on the seeds btw... as I chose my poison well!
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Sat Jun 06, 2009 3:18 pm

Jasper wrote:If I'd used Paris in line one... you'd of though Paris Hilton, right? RIGHT!
Wrong, actually. I mean, come on. Paris Hilton? Never!

I admit I didn't think of good old Anatole, though. He had a famously big head, you know.

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Sat Jun 06, 2009 8:05 pm

David wrote:
Jasper wrote:If I'd used Paris in line one... you'd of though Paris Hilton, right? RIGHT!
Wrong, actually. I mean, come on. Paris Hilton? Never!

I admit I didn't think of good old Anatole, though. He had a famously big head, you know.

Cheers

David
Who's Paris Hilton?
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