Oh, for the speckled leaves!

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arunansu
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Thu Jul 30, 2009 9:30 am

Today, the canvas is packed with flamboyant
croton shrubs: an assemblage of mauve,
lemon and jade; shiny dreams
invite me for a trip beyond
my realm.

I wonder, whether the veins and ribs are set ablaze
with the fury of a frustrated spring. Leathery skins
appear to be dappled with blood-print,
each leaf seems to bear the agony
scripted in wearied pages
of a poet’s memoir.

Yet minuscule stars dangle in racemes,
hold out hope, perhaps content
with a life that doesn’t need
sunshine to boost
their splendor.

I fondle them, try to understand them, and feel
their silence; precious fabrics they are,
spun with a mother’s mind.
Ever- endearing.
And evergreen.
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Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:05 am

Brilliant Aru. You have come to Light and i love you..............

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Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:08 am

Thanks for the time, Lovely. :D
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Sat Aug 01, 2009 12:33 pm

I thought this was lovely - it has a dreamy quality which always ticks a box for me, and great touches like leaves being fabric "spun with a mother's mind".
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Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:52 pm

Thank you for the reply and the time, Jsabian.
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