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Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:55 am

in a fresh spring
unfurling ferns ache to touch
the distant Sun's cheek.
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:35 am

the distant Sun's cheek
softly brushes
twilight river
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Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:45 pm

twilight river
caresses your velvet skin
we flow beyond time.
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Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:42 am

we flow beyond time
petite bird
lost in sky
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Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:26 am

lost in sky
heaven-bound thoughts
earthy fragrance
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Wed Sep 02, 2009 7:26 am

earthy fragrance
attracts Adam, Eve
and raindrops
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Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:58 am

and raindrops
marry
on windowpane
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Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:19 am

on windowpane
her fluttery eyes
seek sunshine
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Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:55 pm

seek sunshine
the April's buds
opening their arms
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Fri Sep 04, 2009 11:06 am

Opening their arms,
two lovers ran together
and blurred into one.
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Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:14 am

and blurred into one
twin rainbows
near a cliff
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Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:34 am

near a cliff
moisture gathers in puddles
dry crevices wet.
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Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:11 pm

dry crevices wet
with mid-August tears
koel's song
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Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:15 am

Koel’s song is sung.
Flames rise and ignite the clouds.
My shutters stay closed.
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Sun Sep 06, 2009 1:19 pm

My shutters stay closed.
Room,a banyan-shade
sans the summer breeze
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Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:02 am

sans the summer breeze
sans maple leaves
and you
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Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:52 pm

and you
smiling somewhere
beside your shadow
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Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:18 pm

Beside your shadow.
You just don't see it coming,
he'll double-cross you.
In the beginning there was nothing, and it exploded. (Terry Pratchett on the Big Bang Theory)
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Wed Sep 09, 2009 4:47 am

He'll double-cross you
torment you
the hailstorm
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Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:42 pm

the hailstorm killed her
she's now a dandelion
again
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Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:09 am

again
Jesus will watch
morning glow
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Fri Sep 11, 2009 10:45 am

morning glow
warmth flows to my open heart
you bring butterflies.
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Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:53 pm

you bring butterflies






You bring butterflies
They're the old hopes kept bedside
sealed tightly in a jar.
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Sat Sep 12, 2009 7:31 am

sealed tightly in a jar
heart thumps
bird without wings
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bird without wings
watches supersonic jet
soap bubbles drift
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