Moonlight Prana ( some things I've changed here)
This flood of pouring rain is life-force with a name
the trees are lungs for us
these rivers, deep her blood,
this earth all we have,
this body must be glad,
the life-force through veins
are lightning bolts blue its name,
our fingertips, these lights,
they brighten up the stars,
to serve and help all souls.......
the way home is far,
the movement of my tongue
vibrations--------- all is One,
this breath I deeply breathe
these waves of light and sea,
one must help------ we must,
our sailing boats adjust,
a million years to spell
in this heaven or hell,
below until above
still waiting for my love,
my heart it will not rest
till love is manifest,
deep within my soul
the Cosmic-Conscience is Whole!
This, a truth to see,
the only spark ever left in me,
In moonlight, there's a spell....
to roam in heaven or hell. Wow.
The poet must adjust
to find his deeper love,
this prana is all Life
it cuts one like a knife,
what we need to ask
of our deep and loving past,
love's eternal youth
the moon-doors we walk through,
one leads to hell
the other I won't spell,
it's for us to find, love in Higher Minds.
the trees are lungs for us
these rivers, deep her blood,
this earth all we have,
this body must be glad,
the life-force through veins
are lightning bolts blue its name,
our fingertips, these lights,
they brighten up the stars,
to serve and help all souls.......
the way home is far,
the movement of my tongue
vibrations--------- all is One,
this breath I deeply breathe
these waves of light and sea,
one must help------ we must,
our sailing boats adjust,
a million years to spell
in this heaven or hell,
below until above
still waiting for my love,
my heart it will not rest
till love is manifest,
deep within my soul
the Cosmic-Conscience is Whole!
This, a truth to see,
the only spark ever left in me,
In moonlight, there's a spell....
to roam in heaven or hell. Wow.
The poet must adjust
to find his deeper love,
this prana is all Life
it cuts one like a knife,
what we need to ask
of our deep and loving past,
love's eternal youth
the moon-doors we walk through,
one leads to hell
the other I won't spell,
it's for us to find, love in Higher Minds.
Last edited by Lovely on Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:53 pm, edited 26 times in total.
I can feel the calmness of moonlight in this piece, Lovely. I love how you used the word 'Prana'. The title is just in sync with the theme! About the rhymes, you know better! ![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif)
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Thanks Aru. I just wanted to give some energy with it, however I feel it is by no means
polished........thanks again though.
I know this is off the subject but i've just been listening to KIngs Of Leon again "sex on fire" and it seems
to fit in with this song..........that's weird.......same pacy beat..it's not a song though.
I think it needs polishing when I get more time I promise I will try and do it proper.
LOL
polished........thanks again though.
I know this is off the subject but i've just been listening to KIngs Of Leon again "sex on fire" and it seems
to fit in with this song..........that's weird.......same pacy beat..it's not a song though.
I think it needs polishing when I get more time I promise I will try and do it proper.
LOL
Last edited by Lovely on Wed Sep 09, 2009 2:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HHhhcKxflMY
KIngs Of Leon
This number for them "2sex on fire" which is weird.......... they
changed it to "sex on fire" still like it though.. my (persona) is a secret sorry.
They were stuck in a rut as it were, can you write something for us then lovely,
no way I said, but then I caved in......... enjoy it if you want to xxxxxxx
They didn't hold me down guys--- only images here, do love the bass guitarist
though, he's a nice bloke man.......
l x
KIngs Of Leon
This number for them "2sex on fire" which is weird.......... they
changed it to "sex on fire" still like it though.. my (persona) is a secret sorry.
They were stuck in a rut as it were, can you write something for us then lovely,
no way I said, but then I caved in......... enjoy it if you want to xxxxxxx
They didn't hold me down guys--- only images here, do love the bass guitarist
though, he's a nice bloke man.......
l x
Last edited by Lovely on Wed Sep 09, 2009 7:49 pm, edited 10 times in total.
This is scaring the s... out of me. I'm writing numbers for groups all the time
but since i've ringed with you I'm getting scared when can we stop and this loving
or should we love and love until we die?.........that's nice.
forever love you always...your sex is is on fire.......but feel really scared, really.
I don't know to how to call it now or something else or a "ting " still missing her spell...
loads of love you deeply well still scared for this thing........I love you guys but
I just don't know...........so ever from me i will weigh her up to and sex on fire
love those guys it has that kicking melody ........I so love
l xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
but since i've ringed with you I'm getting scared when can we stop and this loving
or should we love and love until we die?.........that's nice.
forever love you always...your sex is is on fire.......but feel really scared, really.
I don't know to how to call it now or something else or a "ting " still missing her spell...
loads of love you deeply well still scared for this thing........I love you guys but
I just don't know...........so ever from me i will weigh her up to and sex on fire
love those guys it has that kicking melody ........I so love
l xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Last edited by Lovely on Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:25 am, edited 1 time in total.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=alJ87WnQ5XA ........for you guys it's a song I so
much love.. "from the film, "Up In Smoke" .. I do love chong
x
much love.. "from the film, "Up In Smoke" .. I do love chong
x
The reason why I did not put original draft here is because I'm twisting the verbs here
It helps me loads.......will always be writing songs for souls though........
please understand.
l x
It helps me loads.......will always be writing songs for souls though........
please understand.
l x
Last edited by Lovely on Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Loads of love always David. Power and love to you dear friend and your Beautiful
Soul deeply ever your rivers I love........really so David.
I am with you and love you. Dave you have that feel, which is a veil,
which Isis has worn so well for thousands of my tears.
I still like "Chong" though David.....reminds me of You.
What is wrong with nine, David? There are 12 planets
the one between Jupiter and mars was smashed to bits
it was known as (Lucifer( David, so much for 'cosmic awareness' eh?
The history of our solar system is truly vast ...would you like to know
David? About (12 planets) not nine........and why our cosmos is so?
All the human beings I meet sadly shy away from these questions
they have been to Oxford and have learned Nothing in Wisdom.
Quite sad really, I feel so ever sorry for them David.
About the smashing of the (planet Lucifer) would any one
like to know for truth is really a kill
I leave it to you all, I guess, though no one likes the truth do they?
LOL x
Soul deeply ever your rivers I love........really so David.
I am with you and love you. Dave you have that feel, which is a veil,
which Isis has worn so well for thousands of my tears.
I still like "Chong" though David.....reminds me of You.
What is wrong with nine, David? There are 12 planets
the one between Jupiter and mars was smashed to bits
it was known as (Lucifer( David, so much for 'cosmic awareness' eh?
The history of our solar system is truly vast ...would you like to know
David? About (12 planets) not nine........and why our cosmos is so?
All the human beings I meet sadly shy away from these questions
they have been to Oxford and have learned Nothing in Wisdom.
Quite sad really, I feel so ever sorry for them David.
About the smashing of the (planet Lucifer) would any one
like to know for truth is really a kill
I leave it to you all, I guess, though no one likes the truth do they?
LOL x
I've tried to watch those videos - the first one I get "This video is not available in your country due to copyright restrictions" (the swine!), but I quite like the Cheech and Chong one. Which one is Chong?
Nine is just fine.
Nine is just fine.
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Go on then, tell us about Lucifer. But surely any extra planets were destroyed long before mankind came along to name them? Or am i being too literal? ![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif)
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never mind" Ross" i wana know now ! What wont we believe lovely ? x
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Lovely,
I am checking in just to say that I have read the thread....
have not had time for the videos but will get to it later.
Lovely, you add interesting colours to this place.
Suzanne
I am checking in just to say that I have read the thread....
have not had time for the videos but will get to it later.
Lovely, you add interesting colours to this place.
Suzanne