A very quick but interesting poem that I wrote yesterday. All comments are very much appreciated.
Can anyone make the perfect circle?
Smoothing the bumps and constant hurdles.
Sure.
It will be better this time.
No
more, it will be perfect.
Words in whatever medium you choose,
will not always be true.
Have I ever made the perfect circle?
No
not yet.
But maybe
one day.
Louise Webster
Circles
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That flows just nice does that..(weird lancashire twang going on)..Can't see much relevance to anything though.Not that the poem suffers for this.It is an interesting (as you said) little piece.Has me wondering if you are as well?
God told me to!
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Thanks for the reply and im loving the twang there, lol. Well at the time I was thinking about love, but now it just makes me wonder even more.