Nestled in anticipation

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Suzanne
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Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:31 pm

Nestled in anticipation


Pristine down blankets
warmth envelops her essence;
she sleeps while he dreams.





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Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:16 am

A sweet warm haiku
over her like eiderdown:
Suzanne's winter night.


:)
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Tue Dec 29, 2009 1:25 pm

Thank you, Marc.
Nice haiku from you.

I enjoy doing them, a haiku. And sometimes it is nice just to post something, anything... like a polite nod to the friends in the room.
Thanks.

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Tue Dec 29, 2009 2:35 pm

You are such a romantic, Suzanne.

Good thought on posting something, anything. :)

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Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:17 pm

A sweet moment . I can relate to the lying awake next to he that sleeps theme!
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Tue Dec 29, 2009 6:45 pm

What nice warming thoughts :)
It always happens when you least expect it. AC
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