Haiku Train

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Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:12 pm

deeply hidden scars
snagging at her life's progress.
Twisting in the wind.
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:28 pm

twisting in the wind
a man hangs on empty dreams
there's only one king.
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:32 pm

There's only one king
but although I search these lands
I don't know his name.
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:38 pm

" I don't know his name?"
Because he moves like the wind
rides an agile mare.
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:40 pm

Rides an agile mare
holding tight over the jumps,
sailing in the air.
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:11 pm

Sailing in the air
he soars over me with ease!
No one but My Kite.
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:42 pm

No one but Mike Height
knew how to handle a gun
the way Frankie did.
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 11:07 am

the way Frankie did
with his pink, soap bubble grin
I was fooled again.
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 1:54 pm

I was fooled again.
It seems his soap bubble grin
was in fact rabies!
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 2:43 pm

was infact rabies
standing at a great distance
she watched as he drooled.
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 4:58 pm

she watched as he drooled.
Not a pretty sight she thought.
Hydrophobia.
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 5:40 pm

Hydrophobia,
that's very, very funny,
hydrophobia.
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 11:52 pm

Hydrophobia.
The fear of taking a bath
for an old hobo.
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:23 pm

for an old hobo
he was very quite dashing
with musician's hands.
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:35 pm

with musician's hands,
and memories of springtime --
new haiku are born.
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:55 pm

new haiku are born
immobilized by blue eyes
you know I can't move.
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:23 pm

you know I can't move
she's cuffed my hands and ankles.
Where's the riding crop?
to anticipate touching what is unseen seems far more interesting than seeing what the hand can not touch
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:27 pm

Where's the riding crop?
Twinkle her eyes into his,
she cinched the saddle.
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:34 pm

she cinched the saddle,
with no regard for her own --
Rider on the Storm.
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:37 pm

Rider on the Storm
opening doors and closing
the windows once more.
to anticipate touching what is unseen seems far more interesting than seeing what the hand can not touch
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:51 pm

The windows once more
reflect back a crystal ship --
when you're at the wheel.
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 7:02 pm

when you're at the wheel
flying in that little car
I'll take off my shoes.
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 7:12 pm

I'll take off my shoes --
start our clumsy foreplay. Where
do you want to go?
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:02 pm

do you want to go:
journey on the haiku train,
visit strange new words.
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Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:21 am

visit strange new words...
unwritten letters still packed,
she's waiting for lines.
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