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Asbo1
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Wed Oct 26, 2005 2:22 pm

Sticks and stones may break your bones
but baseball bats work better

Michael Fish needs a satellite dish
When trying to predict the weather

The owl and the pussy cat went to see
They'd been press ganged into the Navy

OXO scores very low on a Scrabble board
But makes exceedingly tasty gravy

Richard Madeley is alive and getting paid
WHY?
God told me to!
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Wed Oct 26, 2005 6:15 pm

Wow you really don't like him, do you?
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Wed Oct 26, 2005 8:37 pm

That is an interesting piece, it made me laugh especially the mention about Michael Fish. I hope to see more of your work soon
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