Noon Journal of the Short Poem

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Macavity
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I have a poem appearing here, on page 27:

https://issuu.com/noonpress/docs/noon_25


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Congratulations, Phil!

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Cheers John. A second round on me 😃
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Tue Apr 30, 2024 8:31 am

Well done, Phil. I gotta confess I don't understand the poem, but then what do I know of Joy?
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Cheers. Buddhism is one interpretation. Personally, I prefer oblivion.
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Macavity wrote:
Tue Apr 30, 2024 9:22 am
Cheers. Buddhism is one interpretation. Personally, I prefer oblivion.
You're not a Birmingham City supporter, are you?
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Real football is in div 2 and mid table mediocrity!
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Macavity wrote:
Tue Apr 30, 2024 10:25 am
Real football is in div 2 and mid table mediocrity!
That's exactly where Birmingham are headed. Let me guess - Newport County?
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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: :oops: :D
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Tue Apr 30, 2024 6:45 pm

Congratulations, Phil.
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If you don't like the black theme, it is easy to switch to a lighter color. Just ask me how.
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.
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Cheers Caleb
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Thu May 02, 2024 8:47 pm

Much enjoyed your short Phil. NOON is such a quality venue for short poems. Probably the best.

Many congrats!

Cheers,

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Cheers Tristan.
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