Sleeping Adventures

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cooladd
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Sun Apr 02, 2006 11:55 pm

Some people were
Blood spilled
On trodden grass
Piercing metal by their side


Me and people, inside
stories matched, misplaced
a ringing, unheard
Sirens arrive
Question time

Trodden grass, again
examined minds
walls of echoed anticipation
frenzy

locked up?
fear
a glimpse of
seeing sunfilled joy - there

risen again
where?
in a place of memories
where the joy filled place is here
cooladd
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Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:26 pm

I wrote this one about a dream i had,
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